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EDITING YOUR PROTAGONIST

 1. Watch the film, Adaptation

2. Read the article by Hollywood script reader, Monica Partridge on Your

Protagonist: Likability and the Finish Line"

3. Read Chapter 2 of “Rewrite” by Paul Chitlik.


As you read &write, consider:

• What’s the premise of your story?

• Is premise different than a logline? Is it different than theme?

• Does your protagonist match your premise?

• If writing a game where the player has a choice of what kind of person your

protagonist will become, can you still match your protagonist to your premise?

• What’s your protagonist’s one line of dialogue that sums him or her up?

• Have you given your character a worthy flaw? Or allowed one your player could

exploit?

Exercises:

• Reexamine the character documents you created in your Character Creation and

Development class and compare your character’s physiology, sociology, psychology,

goal and the personality flaw that hinders him or her to your draft. See if you’ve kept

your character consistent.

• Try out Chitlik’s exercises on page 33 and 35, and chart the seven-point

structure of your protagonist’s central emotional relationship, then compare against her

character arc.

If writing a game where the player is in control of some aspect of the character's choices

toward one of multiple possible character arcs, map those out as well and do this

comparison. Are both equally satisfying for the player? Does each possible arc have a

seven-point structure?

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